如何写好读后续写在高考中博取阅卷老师的眼球获得梦寐以求的高分，如何在高考中脱颖而出，获得20+高分这是很多老师和学生一直在不懈努力的课题。如何写好读后续写的开头？“well begun is half done！”可见，写好一个故事的开头是多么的重要。以下开头主要从语法手段和写作涉及的内容来探究。

1. 副词An adverbCarefully, he stepped over all the broken glass.Joyfully he skipped up the street.Para 1： (2016. 10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. （时间副词衔接+环境描写）

2. 2. 形容词短语An adj. phrase Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave.Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot.(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Desperate and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her face. （并列情绪形容词）(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. （状态形容词+as/though 引导的倒装句）(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse. (情绪形容词+从句)(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. 3. 分词（现在分词/过去分词）A participle (-ing or –ed word)Looking around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door.Exhausted, he was glad the race was finally over.(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night. （现在分词+情绪形容词）(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.（现在分词+状态形容词）

4. 从属连词 （引导从句）A conjunction

As he walked, he whistledAlthough he was afraid, he jumped right in.5.介词短语 A prepositional phraseAt the end of the lane he suddenly stopped.At the sight of the snake, the little girl screamed at the top of her voice.

6. 对话或独白A dialogue or a monologue“Let’s see who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.“Hold on tight!” My father yelled. This was my first roller coaster ride.

(2017.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. "Get into the car." Paul shouted at Mac. 7. 人物/角色A character Mark is a studious boy who loves reading. His classmates often tease him for being too hardworking and they call him Mr. Smart.One afternoon, while studying at home…8. 情绪描写An emotionThe moment she saw how she did for her Science test, tears started welling up in Tina’s eyes and falling down her cheeks.

9. 环境描写A setting

I closed my eyes to enjoy the gentle breeze and the sounds of the clashing waves. Gently opening my eyes, I saw my parents taking a relaxing stroll along the beach.

The cave was dark and everything was silent. I couldn’t even see my hand in front of my face. I knew this adventure was going to be something that I would never forget.

(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fascination. （视觉+环境描写+拟人）

10. 动作描写 An action

Furry started wagging his tail and running around in circles when he saw his master taking a leash out from the drawer. Furry was all ready for his evening walk.

(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Dad exchanged a glance with me. Why not camp to satisfy Mom? （动作描写+问句衔接）

11. 音效（象声词） Sound effects

BOOM, CRASH! The wind was howling outside of my house. We were having a terrible thunder storm. I was very scared.

12. 以一个问句开头A question

Have you ever been on a self-driving trip? Let me tell you an exciting trip my family took this summer.

Why does trouble always follow me around? Do I have a "kick me" sign on my back or something?

fascination. （视觉+环境描写+拟人）

读后续写： 出彩收尾设计

结尾句是全文的收尾处，需要起到点睛的作用，给读者留下深刻的印象。怎么做到呢？常见的方法：收尾呼应法；名言结尾法和情感升华法。

方法一： 首尾呼应法

例1：2017年，讲述的是于健忘的妈妈一起去旅游的故事。

文章的开头，是这么写的：I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother--loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful.

那么续写结尾的时候可以回到文章的开头再次重申妈妈的性格，来深化主题。

文章结尾可以用首尾呼应的写作手法，：Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice mom.

例2：2018年高考中真题，讲述的是爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场玩迷路的故事。

文章的开头，是这么写的：It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.

文章结尾可以用首尾呼应的写作手法：Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.

例3：2016年高考样题

开头：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.

结尾：What a funny day. Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious experience.

方法二：名言式结尾法

使用名言结尾往往能给文章增添文采，同时也能起到凝炼中心，深化主旨的作用，因此在平时我们不仅要多加积累，也要明白名言蕴含的道理，以便使其用在合适的语境中。需要注意的是：不可生搬硬套名言警句，一定要具体文本具体分析。

例1：Don't judge each day by the harvest you reap but by the seeds that you plant.

（不要根据你每天的收获来判断每一天，而是根据你每天播种了多少。）

例2：It is during our darkest moments that we must focus to see the light.

（越是在最黑暗的时刻，我们越要寻找光明。）

例子3：Tell me and I forget. Teach me and I remember. Involve me and I learn.

（告诉我，我会忘记。教给我，我会铭记。让我参与，我会掌握。）

例4：In the end, it's not the years in your life that count. It's the life in your years.

（最后，重要的不是你生命中的岁月，而是你如何度过这些岁月的。）

方法三：情感升华法

每一个故事的创作不止为了讲清楚一件事情的来龙去脉，还要包含作者想要表达的寓意，想与读者分享的感悟，这种思想往往贯穿全文，并在故事结尾时得到升华，在读后续写的结尾部分可以采用情感升华的方式，让读者产产生情感上的共鸣，激发读者思考。

情感升华的结尾要求，要有较高的立意，它是故事的灵魂所在，这样的结尾能够产生强烈的艺术感染力，通常我们可以通过表现人生感悟、生活真谛、生活哲理、人生观或价值观来达到结尾部分的情感升华。

例1：2017年高考真题，我们可以用“情感升华”法来表达母爱对我的深远影响。

Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model. To me there is none other than my mom. She has beauty, brains, and one of the best hearts I know. Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can be a famous dancer. Someday, when I am older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.

例2：

I am extremely unhappy about it. I think money doesn’t equal happiness.。And free life style also doesn’t equal happiness. The real happiness is that everyone loves each other, and does everything useful for our society. Most of my classmates support me. But some of them think money is everything. In my opinion, money can’t take the place of everything, such as your life, your time and your happiness.